Thursday, August 6, 2009

Haiku Buckaroo V

Red juicy flesh bursts
I indulge the cherries fast
only pits remain.

My shoulder is sore
so I can't lift anything
which comes in handy.

Pain radiates down
from my neck to my elbow:
How to hold myself?

I stare so confused
at the coffeemachine that
pours next to my cup

I'm not quite awake
yet placing my cup wrongly.
I need coffee now!


instructions not is
IKEA this assembl'd
Haiku read an the

this is a nicely
assembl'd IKEA haiku
after some puzzling

My feet are itchy
My legs are itchy as well
I hate mosquitos

Leslie at Mymommysplace is organising her twice a year haiku contest again so it was time for me to start counting syllables again. Are you interested to play as well: go here. The contest deadline is 11:59 p.m. EST, Wednesday August 12th. Of course you can just go and check the other contestants as well :)


Lilacspecs said...

That's a lot of variation. I like the Ikea ones!
Good luck in the contest. I'll be haiku-ing when we get back from Coo.

Jen of A2eatwrite said...

I liked the Ikea ones, too. I also especially liked the humor/twist in your second one!

Alex Elliot said...

I can so relate to the part about the coffee machine!

Brian Miller said...

i like cherries and coffee. smiles. fun play.

Leslie said...

I love these! The Ikea ones really made me giggle. I'm so glad you entered the contest!